Book Review: Would-Be Witch

[May contain a spoiler, depending on what you count as a spoiler. Well be labeled as such. Look for the asterisk.]

Would-Be Witch by Kimberly Frost

“In the small town of Duvall, Texas, the only thing that cause more trouble than gossip—is magic. The family magic seems to have skipped over Tammy Jo Trask. All she gets in the way of the supernatural are a few untimely visits from the long-dead, smart-mouthed family ghost, Edie. But when her locket–an heirloom that happens to hold Edie’s soul–is stolen in the midst of a town-wide crime spree, it’s time for Tammy to find her inner witch. After a few experiences with her dysfunctional magic, Tammy turns to the only person who can help: the very rich and highly magical Bryn Lyons. He might have all the answers–and a double-oh-seven savior faire to boot–but the locket isn’t the only thing passed down in Tammy’s family. She’s also inherited a warning…to stay away from anyone named Lyons…”

I was debating whether to give this book three stars or four. I’ve settled for three and a half instead.

The first star comes from the book immediately pulling me in. It was able to hold my interest long enough to get hooked, which is kind of hard for me these days. It’s becoming harder and harder to find a book that can captivate me all the way to the end. This book was able to do that. Each chapter had a great cliff at the end that had me constantly saying “just one more chapter”. Before I knew it, it was 3am.

The second star comes from how close the magic in the book came to real magic. This wasn’t “Sabrina, the Teenage Witch” kind of magic. I really appreciated that. Of course some things were different to make the witches unique to the story.

The third star is because of the low levels romance in the book. Now don’t get me wrong, I’m a hopeless romantic so I love me some romance. But I hate when it gets in the way of the plot. I found Would-Be Witch in the adult fiction section so I thought it’d be basically pornographic, but it wasn’t. The author kept the sexiness to a PG-13 rating.

The half star is because of the characters of the book. The lead character, obviously a woman, wasn’t the typical annoying, damsel in distress lead female. She actually got things done. The only thing I didn’t like about her was she was a little…stupid is such a strong word. We’ll go with dense. She was a little dense. Only slightly. She didn’t know what Garlic was or the Red Light District. Some of her decisions and reasoning was pretty daft as well. She did have her clever and funny moments too. We’ll just say she was quirky.

The other characters were okay. I didn’t hate them, but I didn’t love them. That’s why they only get half a star.

Now on to the reasons why the book didn’t get five stars.

Like I mentioned earlier, there was minimal romance, but the romance that there was was a messy love triangle. I have love triangles, unless they’re done right. The only love triangle that was done right was in Cassandra Clare’s “The Infernal Devices”. This live triangle was just rather annoying.

Even tho the story as a whole was entertaining, I felt like the writing was a little all over the place. I kind of felt like some pieces of the story didn’t really fit and were kind of pointless.

***Possible spoiler*** the mission of the main character was to find her locket that had been stolen. I felt like she kept getting distracted and even forgot about the locket for about half the book. Thus, making the ending rather anti-climatic. That kind of ruined the book a little for me.

All in all, I would recommend this book to a friend, but I’d tell them to add it to the bottom of their “To Read” list.

*Warnings* This book is an adult fiction novel. There was some swearing and sex talk. It didn’t offend me, but it might offend some. This book also contains vampires and werewolves, but nothing like Twilight.


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